Choose It

Narrative Planning


Once upon a time there lived a man named Jack Sparrow he was the one who brought all the nations together, then they discovered that he stole a souvenir from the highest general ship.They realised that Jack Sparrow was too good for them to catch, so  they gave up on him and turned back never to return for him as he sails. The time had come for the amazing Jack Sparrow and his crew to set across the seas and find the air that lives to tell the tale. The young air was as grateful as Jack Sparrow but his words weren’t as great as as the young man, the young man felt love and joyful places that he comes across, until the young man saw the love of his life standing right in front of him.He kindly asked where she was heading she told him that she is going to an island where nobody knows. But Sparrow caught him before he could even see who it was but it was too late because they had already left, the young man was exhausted to see Jack Sparrow's face, his heart pumping his eyes grew even more frightened. As they sailed away  Jack had heard a big thrash coming from behind them and he noticed it was the black riders, their  face angry as a person would try getting there hands on someone and that someone would be Jack Sparrow. The young man asked if he could help but Jack wouldn’t accept the offer because it was his job and serve and protect for his life but he didn’t listen so he went and fought with them until the black riders would sink  down all the way to the bottom of the entire Ocean of Spain. The young man thanked Jack for his offer to protect him but this time he had accepted the kind speech that the young man had, Jack asked for a named and the young man said it was Ronin. So they went to a land where nobody knows and there they felt love and happiness with people that are there with them. Ronin saw the girl that he met earlier in begging so at last there they in the land that makes them happy with each other even Jack Sparrow and the crew on board.



                   The End

Narrative Writing

 Jack Sparrow in Fairytale Land

Once upon a time there lived Jack Sparrow, his crew, the young man Jack and the witch in fairytale land. One day Jack Sparrow and his crew set off to find the witch, the young man Jack heard them talking about a witch so he went after them. The witch felt a strange magic coming her way so she knew that someone was coming for her so she prepared herself, when Jack Sparrow and his men got to fairytale land they went searching for her. The young man kept track of them to see what they were up to, he followed them ride up until they got to the mountains that’s when he saw a house floating on the bridge so he knew that was the witch’s cottage,Jack Sparrow and the crew were already there but they were knocking on the door but no one answered. Until they saw the witch coming back from the mountains, started asking some questions but the guardians wouldn’t let her saw a word. Sparrow gave her one last chance but she blew it so Jack Sparrow and his men killed her guardians, so the young man Jack had enough of them fooling around with the witch so he went down the hill to the cottage with bravery. He walked straight up to them and he said’’ leave her alone but they didn’t listen then the second time he said it he started fighting them until they got up to the point where Sparrow’s men gave up and ran. But Sparrow never gave up so the young man Jack said never come back to fairytale land so then he gave  Sparrow a warning. 

The witch thanked him for helping her out because she knew they would come for her, but he wouldn’t let them hurt her. So he gave her a promise that he would always check up on her every month, he said that as he was walking back up the mountain and down to the sea and back to his boat. The young man had been very brave and king to help out that witch because he cares for his own people suffering from Jack Sparrow and his crew does, but he mainly goes on journeys across the seas and journeys to the islands that hasn’t been discovered. So off he went   back on his journey to who knows where but the legend says beware wherever you go, you show see some unexpected things that nobody knows. 

But Jack Sparrow continued going around and looking for some loot that he and his crew have in mind, the thing is that the young man Jack has already set off to continue what he had started. So now that is leaving Jack Sparrow and his men i until Jack returns, Sparrow lightened up with joy and started feeling really excited that the young man Jack had left. But that is the very end of my made up story and thanks for reading my story.

                  The End