Tuesday, 13 August 2019

Persuasive writing school hours

Hook: I think that school should go on early and finish late?

Good reason 
Students aren’t competing with each other because they spend to much time at home. But if we try and bring them closer they will agree too.

Better reason
School helps us get better and gets us into more sports to keep us strong.

Best reason
Why because we have to learn more and to see living things. How our kids can have a better future and they can  live their dreams.

Conclusion: We all have to stick to the finish early and finish in the afternoon at three o’clock. But we must think to help get from our parents and mostly our mates.

Why we should make school start early and finish late to have a great start at our learning. Students aren’t competing with each other because they spend to much time at home on their phones or other stuff as well. But if we try they will come to school early and go home in the afternoon. School helps us get better.More sports to make us  stay strong and be brave to explore more adventures with travelers that are travel around the world. Why because we need to learn more about ourselves and more about living things with doctor Terry. How our kids could have a better future and a better experience of a life time. We all have to stick to when school ends and starts so we can be better parents and teachers for the school and for our family and friends.

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