Task description: This blog post is about Don't let go this is a narrative writing that I've done for my Literacy class room 1 team 5. This is the work that I've done this is showing others what a narrative writing is all about. I did this last week and now it is finally on my blog.
On a cold and faithful night, it was a full moon. Something magical happened to a girl named Cinderella who really wanted to go to the ball festival at the palace. She kindly asked her mother if she could go. But all of a sudden her mother said”No you can not go to the ball”, but the girl said”Please I’ll do all my chores and whatever needs to be done. Then her mother got annoyed with her and all of a sudden she just left. So the Cinderella went outside and continued swiping the path,as she was swiping a fairy popped up and the girl fell into a shock to see that there was a fairy right in front of her. The fairy spoke saying “Cinderella I am your fairy godmother”, Cinderella said “ I have a fairy god mother I never knew I had one. The fairy asked if she wanted to go to the ball and Cinderella said “ Yes” with excitement. Then the fairy got her wound out and spoke saying something in her own language then Cinderella’s dress turned into something amazing and made a carriage pumpkin and animals that looked like people, and said” remember 11 o’clock be back and be fast because everything will go back to normal okay” then Cinderella left going to the ball to the palace. When she got there she ran into the palace and the prince had chosen her to dance with, all the girls were looking at her really angry because they saw Cinderella dancing with the prince,cause they wanted to dance with him. She had carried on dancing until the bell rang then she had told the prince that she must be leaving, but the prince asked if she was ever gonna come back, then Cinderella said” yes since there are 2 more nights for the ball left”. So Cinderella got on the carriage and rode off, she got back home before her step mother and got changed into her dress that she was wearing at the start. But she kept on going to the ball but then on the last night at the ball her mother caught her and grabbed her by the wrist and pulled her into a room but the prince saw what had happened so he followed them into the room. Cinderella’s step mother said “how dare you come to the ball I thought I told you that you weren’t invited!”The prince had had enough so the prince came out and said” you’re wrong everybody’s invited to this ball”he went up Cinderella and he grabbed her and left. The prince said” you can stay with me if you want” then Cinderella said” I'd love to, thank you so much your highness”. So Cinderella left her mother and felt very excited because she was free and went out to more of the kingdom with the prince. Then one faithful day they went into the village and started to look for something to have a little snack but then they came across a place where there were wedding rings but then they moved on to the next stand,but the prince said”you go ahead I’ll catch up”. Then Cinderella said” oh ok” so then she carried on and the prince went to go ask how much the wedding ring he saw was so then he bought and when he finally caught up to her all of a sudden he got on his knees and said”Cinderella will you marry me”,she said”yes” so they went to the palace and asked for the King and Queens blessing
Hey Alison,
ReplyDeletenice narrative writing you have done, I really like the detail and dialogue in your story. Hope you can split your big paragraph so you we can all know what the different parts are, keep up the good work though on all your blog posts.